The World Expo in 2010 英语世博作文(5)

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me through the college education. [3]To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation. [4]Therefore, [5]with the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.

[6]I give you my promise that the loan would be used properly. [4]Meanwhile, I’ll [7]spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan. I would be greatly obliged if my application is granted. And I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely yours,

Song Xue

【亮点点评】

[1]“主修…”，现在分词作伴随状语。

[2]“超出…的能力范围”。

[3]“使事情更糟糕的是”。

[4]过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。

[5]“with+宾语+宾补”的独立结构。

[6]“我保证…”，that引导同位语从句。

[7]“不遗余力”。

佳句临摩

1.佳句：To make matters worse, my mother has suddenly fallen ill and is expecting a major operation.

临摩：令人更迷惑不解的是，很多飞机都从大海上离奇消失了。

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2.佳句：Therefore, the college tuition becoming a much heavier burden on my family, I am compelled to apply a RMB20,000 bank loan.

临摩：由于周围交通不便利，人们只得步行回家。

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3.佳句：Meanwhile, I’ll spare no effort to work hard both in the study and my future career in order to pay back the loan.

临摩：全国人民都不遗余力地支持北京举办奥运会。