网上交友明智吗？英语作文

网上交友明智吗？Is it wise to make friends online?

描述现象句
越来越多的人网上交友。
a hige involvement/participation in making friends online

明智：
可供和写作观点：
one: limited circle of people
you can choose different types of people
two: beyond the regional limitation/social statues
three: the way of making friends online is an effecial way to convey information there are voluntering jobs
four:t he circle of friends can provide facilitions
five: share interest
six: encourage each other
seven; real_time communication
eight: choose the way of communication
nine: solve the problem
ten: share happiness and sadness
eleven: instant chance to offer yourselves to a new partner just by clicking the keyboard and pressing the "yes" botton.
twelve: making friends online brings fresh air in our life because we're tired of recurrent familiar faces.

句子
一。你可以与任何地方的人交流。
However far we are,we may be close friends once online.(far 与close反义对比）Inspite of distance,internet brings us together.
二。我们可以缓解来自工作、生活的压力。
Occasionally,friends online always act as dumping ground where we just drop our sorrows and tears regardless of their will.
三。因为我们不认识，所以很自由，可以想说什么就说什么。
Distant strangers always breeds intangible familarity.it frees us to talk without the embarrassment of effect by a wider knowledge of your
privacy.
四。网络可以让你了解很多。
As for armchair travelers,internet can be a best choice for its good supply of vivid pictures and lively videos.
五，网上交友可以了解更多文化，历史
can enable/provide sb a third eye to see varied cultures,customs and histories.
open up a window to see.
easily access to how different peoples honor cultures
六：是看不见的人，不必担心后果。
The communication with invisible person brings us a psychological the exchange.the failure of it cannot engage/involve us into embarrassment of/from later meets.
七，在网上交友，我们可以自由的表达自己。（不必担心对方表情，肢体语言）
a free outlet ,go beyond the limitions/confinement created by the gap from ages,occupations,educational backgrounds,social status.
八：有事不方便与父母，朋友讲，可以与网友说。
people (tend to/have such inclination to)share happiness and sorrows with stranger/not familiar people around you,
九，讨论到同一话题时，不同的人来自不同的地方，有着不同的见解。
different ideas from different people flow in for one topic.
different ideas (pop up/sprin
g up/flourish)from different people are at their blossom.
十。缩短了彼此的距离。
familarity grows.
十一。交外国朋友，提高语言技能。
our foreign friends always benefits

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改句：
I一，t is fun to chat with different people online.
改为1,it's a delightful experience to communicate with different people
2,the way of making friends online bring different kind of people together,providing an easy access to communicating with them.
in our daily life,we're less exposed to such a chance.we get close to various fields by other's words on the screen or from the online
video.
we are deprived of such a chance to meet different groups of people at once.
二:internet is like a link.
改为internet resemble a link.
strangers( join together to make friends online/log in to seek new faces online).
groups of people refresh the page to search the desired candidates.


不明智：
可供写作观点：
one: waste of time
two: communication fail to convey effect message it centers on trifles.
third: easily lead to crime
four: it decrease of ability of ture communication because you are talking with invisible person
five: the friendship cannot last easily.
six: the information can be taken advantage of by...
seven: it is hard to get full information of sb
eight: create distant invision
nine: have a fake intention to make acquitance with easy victims/target.

句子
一：网上交友使我们与周围人相处时间减少。
Making friends online robs us of chance to stay with living bodies.
二：网上交流采用的是文字的交流，有时候表达不充分。
People engaged in the word transmission of making friends online often find themselves at a loss when in a face_to_face talk for facial expressions and gestures always tell more (than what is said).
三：犯罪分子易使用网上交友犯罪。
Criminals resort to the way of making friends online,as the candidates to coax just by making advantage of one's credulity.
四：随随便便见网友会有危险。
Have a casual meet with cyberpels awlays/may put sb in unknown danger.
五，我们不了解彼此。
We don't get full information of our partners.He is what is described by himself.


改句
网上交友占用了我们与家人交流的时间。
改为：网上交友这种方式使我们忽略了身边的人。
1，Communication with people around us h
as to give way to make friends online. ,
2，When we are engaged in chatting with the invisible person online,we ignorent of people around us.