2011年高考英语作文满分技巧-议论文

写作指导 (8)

议论文

1．议论文是以议论为主要表达方式的一种文体，它通过摆事实、讲道理的方式来辨明是非曲直，从而表达出作者的观点。它常由论点、论据和论证三部分构成。

2．它要求语言必须简练、准确，要尽可能避免使用口语，多用书面语，可适当使用名言警句；以议论为主，辅之以叙述、说明和描写等手法。

3．写作时要围绕中心论点展开议论，即论据和论证要围绕论点展开。根据题目要求，有时需要从正反两方面来论述，可增强论证的力度。最后，可得出结论，照应开头，形成一个有机的整体。

4．写作时常以三段式的形式展开议论。

暑假即将来临，你班同学就假期计划进行讨论，提出了不同看法，请根据提示写一篇英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。

注意：1.词数：80～120(不含已写好部分)；

2．短文必须包括表中所列要点，可根据内容分段表述；

3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

4．参考词汇：眼界horizon (或view)。

The summer holiday is coming.Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday. ________________________________________________________________________

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案例分析⊙

这是一篇典型的议论文体的写作，它以表格的形

式提出了论点(呆在家中的优点和缺点及外出旅游的优点和缺点)和论据，还以文字提示形式提出了话题(假期计划)及需要考生自由发挥的部分(你的看法)，自己的看法可选择上述中的任何一种，并就此发表个人的见解。本文的重点是表格中两种方式的优、缺点，根据题目的特点，以三段式的形式来写作比较好。

根据内容，尽管讨论已经发生，但它是就一般的暑假假期计划而进行的讨论，没有特定的时间界限，因而考生应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。相当一部分考生用一般过去时进行论述，这会失掉较多的分数。从题目所给的开头可知应用第一人称来写。

The summer holiday is coming.Our class have had a discussion about what to do during the holiday.

Some are in favor of staying at home.They think it’s both convenient and comfortable.What’s more，they can save money for other purposes.But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside

world.However，others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons.But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling. In my opinion，it would be much better to stay at home，for I can do what I like，such as reading books，watching TV，and helping my parents with the housework.

近年来，禽流感频发，一些国家在疫区大肆捕杀鸟类。对此，你们班召开了主题班会，讨论结果如下：

注意：1.为使行文流畅，应适当增加细节，不能逐条翻译；

2．词数：120左右；

3．参考词汇：禽流感bird flu；家禽poultry；病毒virus；疫苗vaccine。

【参考答案】

In recent years，bird flu has frequently broken out in many countries and some of them have killed birds on a large scale in affected areas.In view of this action，our class have held a meeting to have a discussion about whether to kill them or not.

Some think it is necessary to kill all the birds.At present it is a good way to prevent the deadly virus from spreading and harming people’s health.The more the virus spreads to，the more difficult it is to conquer.However，others think it is unfair and awfully cruel to do so just for the benefit of human beings.Finding the vaccine as soon as possible is the most important thing.

As far as I’m concerned，catching and killing birds is not necessary.It may cause the birds to die out.After all，birds are friends to us human beings.