雅思 G类书信&大作文写作讲义(17)

新东方雅思强化精讲课程 张驰新 G类书信&大作文写作

2）Nowadays, computer is used more and more in education. Do you think in which areas computer is more important and in which areas teachers are more important？

3）Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment, and only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

4）The best way to decrease the crime rate is to extend the period of sentence for criminals. However, there may be other solutions to alleviate the problem. Compare the sentence-extension with other solutions and state which do you think is the best way for public security

Structure for Task 2 Opening

General situation--topic

Writing objective--specific topic How to solve it initially

people are getting isolated and this opinion?

审题不偏题——观点必须切中细分主题(specific topic) Idea:必须切中文章的Specific Topic Topic: 1st sentence

Specific Topic: 2nd sentence Broad Topic:球

Topic——computer

Specific topic— personal communication, socializing Broad topic—Science and Technology

必须作outline，保障Argument的关键 Arguments三宗罪

1) 2)

Body Material

parallelism 平行架构 redundancy 累赘，冗余 sequence disorder(lack coherency)

From physical to mental

3)

如何做OUTLINE？ solution 3 minutes

1) 2)

brainstorming 1.5min >5 combination 0.5 min