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bag Form the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket,but the only clothes I had was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last. 答案:
happy that I could change my clothes at last.
buy→buying 时态错误,时态为一般进行时。
here→there 代词指代错误
for后加a a long holiday一个很长的假期but→and 逻辑关系错误。前后句并无转折关系,而是承接关系。