高中英语写作基础训练

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写作基础训练张 延 冬

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五个基本句型 1)主语 + 谓语动词 2)主语 + 谓语动词 + 表语 3)主语 + 谓语动词 + 宾语 4)主语 + 谓语动词 + 宾语 + 宾补 5)主语 + 谓语动词 + 间宾 + 直宾 主语 谓语 请观察:(1)_____+ ____是英语句子必不可 少的两要素； 主语 谓 语 (2)_______在前,_______在后 谓 语 (3)______有人称，数，时态和语态 的变化。

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Step 2 Join up sentencesWe can go downtown and do some shopping. __________, we can pay a visit to some places of interest.__________, we can take a rest in cafes. 方法一 连接词(First, second, then...finally, what’s more, however...) 方法二 连词(when ,since, because, although...)

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Practice 1请在下列句子中(间)填上恰当的连词或连接词。

1. Xiao Ming was walking in the street when ___________ he heard someone cry for help. 2. He advised that I hire a car ____________ so that I could travel freely in the city . As soon as 3.___________he heard the cry for help, he jumped into the water to save the girl.

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5. Do you agree with my arrangement ? ________ , do write to me soon. 4. I shared the cost of the gas with my friends .___________, I saved $80. As a result 5. Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. ___________ What’s worse , it may make us fat.

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Step 2 Join up sentences Practice 2(1) *The girl is my classmate.

*The girl won the first prize.

The girl who won the first

prize is my classmate.

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Step 2 Join up sentences(2)* I stayed at home this weekend. * I didn’t go shopping with myfriends.

I stayed at home instead of going shopping this weekend.

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Step 2 Join up sentences(3 )* Today is my birthday. * My friends gave me a lot of presents. * I received the University admission toady * How happy I am today ! Today is my birthday and my friends gave me a lot of presents. What's more, I received the University admission toady. How happy I am !

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Step 3 Listen and retell.English is important in today's world. There are many reasons for it. First, English is widely used in the world. Secondly, we can get very important information in English. Thirdly, English is also used at international meetings. In a word, we can not live well without English today.

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Step 4 Passage structure主题 展 开

主题“总——分——总” 式

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Step 5 Organization(组句成篇)①我经常在课后时间去参观博物馆和微机室， 或到画室画画。 ②自从学生减负以来，我的生活变得有趣多了。 ③晚上，我也有时间看电视和读报了。 ④总的说来，我对现在的生活非常满意。 ⑤再也不用熬夜了，我经常10点左右就去睡了。

Correct order:

② ① ③ ⑤ ④

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my life has become much more interesting. I often visit museums and computer rooms and draw pictures in my spare time. In the evening, I also have time to watch TV and read newspapers. I no longer stay

up late; on the contrary, I go to bed at about 10 pm. In short, I am quite satisfied with my life now.

Since reducing the learning load,

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Dear sally, I’m glad to hear that you are planning to come to Beijing. I’d like to tell you something about this city. Beijing is the capital of China with a long history. There are many places of interest in the city for you to visit, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace and so on. In my opinion, the best season to come to Beijing is autumn because it is neither too hot nor too cold, and you can

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enjoy beautiful flowers and trees everywhere. What’s more, you will have the opportunity to taste some delicious food here. I am sure that you will have a great time in Beijing. Looking forward to your coming! Yours, lihua

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Step 7 Mark for your deskmate Clear idea

5 5 5 5

评 分 原 则

Correct grammar Complete passage Beautiful language

Beautiful handwriting

5

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Step 8

Summary

How to do a good writing ? 1. 准备充足的相关词汇。 2. 把内容要点用简单的句子翻译出来。 3. 按照一定的逻辑顺序整理各句内容，常用 的文章结构多为“总分式”。 4. 运用连词联句成篇。 5. 最后，用漂亮的书法把文章写出来！

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THANK YOU !

Good bye!