in traditional Chinese costume, appears pleasant. 6. Standing under a tree, a beautiful young American girl, an international student who is dressed in traditional Chinese costume, appears obviously pleasant.
总结:通过以上四个步骤,从定主谓入手,通过添加细节,迅速制造出一个30-40字左右的好句子作为大作文开头。
在小作文当中,也是利用同样的方法,迅速的说明事由,细节的添加主要以回答下列几个问题为主:谁(who)在什么时候(when)在什么地方(where)出于何种原因(why)通过何种方式(how)作了什么事情(what) 例如:投诉信:---对两条狗进行投诉
1. These dogs were abandoned and have been causing trouble. 2. These vicious dogs were abandoned and have been causing trouble.
3. These vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought, were abandoned and have been causing trouble.
4. These vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought by my neighbor three weeks ago, were abandoned and have been
causing trouble.
5. Last week, these vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought by my neighbor three weeks ago, were abandoned and have
been causing trouble.
6. Last week, these vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought by my neighbor three weeks ago, were abandoned and have
been causing trouble in our neighborhood ever since.
7. Last week, these vicious dogs, two German shepherds which were bought by my neighbor three weeks ago, were abandoned and have
been causing trouble in our neighborhood ever since, barking day and night, leaving waste everywhere, and even attacking both residents and passers-by. (44字)
下面,请大家按照刚才讲述的步骤练习写下面的句子,这是作文成功的关键,最后冲刺的几天,请一定多练
1. 起点就是终点 (提示:主语是男孩,谓语是跑向终点) 2. 温室的花朵第一幅 (提示:主语是花朵,谓语是挺立) 3. 温室的花朵第二幅 (提示:主语还是花朵,谓语是变得虚弱) 4. 把上两句话用 -------------, while ----------- 的模式连成一句
提解决方案, 分个人和社会两句来写 坏事
好事
Without this necessary habit in all public affairs of a civilized society, nothing could ever be achieved and everything will be in a chaos.
Without this necessary habit in all public affairs of a civilized society, nothing could ever be achieved and everything will be in a chaos.
Therefore, a person with no idea of love, most people believe, is an unfortunate failure in the 21centry, deprived of one of the most valuable intrinsic qualities they should possess.
Therefore, a person with no idea of love, most people believe, is an unfortunate failure in the 21centry, deprived of one of the most valuable intrinsic qualities they should possess.
说出好事的作用(第二句)
指出没有它的后果