本人总结了TEM4考试中常出现的作文形式,对其进行了系统总结,大家可以将这些模板记下来,在写作文的时候进行
直接套用。
观点选择式A or B
1.将原题复述_________When faced with the decision of A of B, quite a few would deem that___, but others, in contrast, believe A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence -A/-B, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows. The main reason for my propensity for A/B is
that___________________
The second reason can be seen by every person that________. In addition, these reasons are also usable when we consider
that_________.
There are some disadvantages in____(另一种观点的缺点).Such
as__________.
In a word, ____________(_重复观点句并缩写理
由)__________________.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that___________.
2。 Some people prefer to A. others believe B. When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that______________, but others, in contrast , deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. There are numerous reasons why___________, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here.
The main reason why I agree with the above statement, however, is that_____________________. Take___________as example,
______________.
There is another factor that deserves some words here. Such as _______________
Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider
that______________.(Exmaples:___________).
From the above you might got idea that I
agree______________.(repeat the above three
reason________).So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to _________.
3.In my point of view, A is as important as, if not more important than
B. So it is sagacious to choose A. Among count less factors which influence A. there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.
The above point is certainly true if A is considered. For
exmaple,___________________
Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that A is better than B. For instance,_______________
It would probably not be too kindly disposed to the idea that B is not important . B________也好_________.
In a word, to choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good
qualities of B, and neglect hte genuinely good aspects of A. For the reasons presented above, I strongly commit to the notion that A, but not B
问题解决型作文模版
●Part One: The Model of Beginning Paragraph
1. ---------has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young, and heated debates are right on their way.
2. Recently, --------has become the focus of the society. And in this way, people swarm to-------.
3. ------has been playing an increasingly important role in our
day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot 0f benefits but created some serious problems as well.
4. Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of------.
5. ------ is now ------,and at the same time ------. These two factors have caused --------. Then what shall we do to solve ------- in the face of such a situation?
●Part Two: The Model of Body Paragraph
1. A great number of solutions are being offered. Some people suggest that ------. Others argue that-------.
2. There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can ------, there are a number of advantages of -----. Another solution is to ---------.
3.Why-----? The first reason is that ------. The second reason is --------. The third is ---------.
4. The eventual result it brings out is ----. And perhaps the most obvious result of---- is ------.
5. ------ is necessary and important to our country’s development and construction. First, ------. What’s more, --------. Most important of all, ---------.
●Part Three: The Model of Concluding Paragraph
1. Personally, I believe that ----. Consequently, I am confident that a bright future is awaiting us because-------.
2. With the development of society, -----. So it is urgent and
necessary to------. If every member is willing to contribute himself to society, it will be better and better.
3. But for me, I would rather think of the matter in an optimistic way,because I believe --------.
4. My own point of view is that ------ is a normal behavior in our
society. There is no doubt that -----. AS an old saying goes, --------.
5. From all the reasons above, we know that great changes had taken place in -----. And I believe that ------.
阐述观点型作文模版
●Model One: 引言: There is no consensus of (opinions/
disagreements) among people as to the view of ----------. Some people suggest that -------, while some other people argue that ----------. I agree with the latter to some extent. 提出自己的论点: I think------------.
提供论据,证明自己的观点: I can think of no better illustration of the (view/idea) than my own (experience/ example) of---------. First, ----- Second, ------ .Finally,------.
结论: My personal experience leads me to conclude that ---------. ●Model Two: 引言: In the past few years, there has bee an growing trend that--------. People have conflicting views of this fact. Some people support and others worry. 提出自己的论点As for what I
think,----------- is (beneficial to us in many ways./useful in many ways.)
提供论据,证明自己的观点:Firstly, -------. Secondly, -------. The last point,---------.
结论: Therefore, we have no reason to make a fuss about---------. ●Model Three: 引言: In recent years there has been a big growth in the area of -------.提出自己的论点: --------is popular that it has
become an indispensable part in our life.
观点评论型作文模版
●Part One Model of Beginning Paragraph
1. One of the great writers once said that ---------. Now it still has a realistic significance.
2. There is an old saying goes that-----------. It’s the experience of our forefather; however, it is correct in many cases even taday.
3. One of our ancient philosophers said, ---------. Chinese people have always been holding this idea to be one of their standards of morality.
4. The English proverb says, ----------. This is quite true
because--------.
5. In our history, the idea that ------- never has been so popular. On one hand,----------, on the other hand,---------.
●Part Two: The Model of the Body Paragraph
1. From a personal perspective, I also prefer to ------ because ---------.
2. The advantages of ------are much greater than those of --------. For instance, -----------.
3. However, if not managed properly, ------ can create many
problems. Sometimes-------. Furthermore, ---------. Therefore, ---------has been gaining public.
4. What is more, the essence of ----- is that -----, although we cannot, most of us------------.
5. To make a moral point, I feel that another reason why I prefer------ is that--------.
●Part Three: The Model of Concluding Paragraph
1. As regards me, I tend to pick-------- , for-------. What is more, ----------.
2. For me, --------- is a glory and it is the most important thing I have take into feasible consideration.
3. If I were given a choice between----and ----, I would certainly prefer -----. For me,------.
4. My point of view in -------- largely results from the fact that --------.
问题分析型作文模版
●Part One : The Model of Beginning Paragraph
1. Last (week/ month), I visited a friend of mine and found that
------- . The (case/story/incident) is not rare. It has now drawn much nationwide attention to the issue/problem of ------------.
We may trace this problem back to --------, but it does not answer the question of why---------.
2. Perhaps nothing is more
(dominant/popular/important/harmful/dangerous )in (the modern world/Chinese family/school/society) than --------. According to a recent(study/investigation/poll)80% teenagers (people/women) are (addicted to/indulged in /interested in) doing--------.
True, it does some good to us, but when we applaud its benefits, we must acknowledge its enormous potential to affect us.
●Part Two: The Model of the Body paragraph
1.分析原因: In my opinion, the (phenomenon/problem/failure/change) in ------ (is partly…/ mainly /largely attributable to…/due to…/owing to….) --------.
The fact that ------ has several factors. First,------. Second, ------. Finally, -----
2. 分析结果: It is important for people /teenagers to realize
that------- ,for it will( produce/ exert/have)a remarkable
(impact/influence/effect) on---------. First of all, -------. Also,-------. Finally,--------.
●Part Three; The Model of Concluding Paragraph
1.There is(no denying/little doubt)that
(special/adequate/considerable/further)attention must be
paid/called/devoted to the problem of --------.If we ignore/fall in/ are blind to the problem, it is very likely that ---------.
2. We must look for /search for/call for an immediate
attention/action/method/measure because the present/current situation/state of ---------.
3. It is suggested/ recommended/hoped that great
/persistent/contiuous efforts should be made to halt/ control/check the danger of-------. Anyhow, wider education/ more publicity should be given to the serious consequences/ effects of ---------. Only by
recognizing/ realizing the -------, necessity/importance/dangerous effect of ----- can we-----.
提供论据,证明自己的观点: ------contribute both to --------and to -------. Besides,------offers -------. And most importantly, ------help to promote --------.
结论: -----plays a vital role in people’s life, and it deserves further attention from(the government/ authorities).
Model Five: 引言: Ever since early this century. 提出自己的论点: ------ has become an essential part of our modern life. It has played a decisive role in modern (industry/agriculture/science and
technology/natural defense and education). Nobody can deny that the development of our civilization depends on---------.
提供论据,证明自己的观点: If there were no --------, our modern world would be in trouble. For one thing,---------. For another,--------. 结论: Therefore, we should make better use of -------.
作文之写作摸板--解决问题/建议型
one way to solve the problem
the best way to ...
ideas and suggestions
典型真题
(1998)
It is now generally accepted that vehicles (cars, trucks, etc.) are a major source of air pollution in cities. You are to suggest only ONE way to solve the problem. One Way to Solve the Problem
(2002)
Nowadays people are becoming increasingly aware of the importance of health. And they have different ways to stay healthy. For example, some exercise every day; others try to keep a balanced diet. What do you think is the best way to stay healthy?
The Best Way to Stay Healthy
(2005)
The Students’ Union of your university is planning to hold an arts festival next semester, and they are inviting students to contribute their ideas and suggestions as to how it should be organized or what should be included. My Idea of a University Arts Festival
解题思路
我们鼓励考生应该有新的构思、多彩的想法,当然也要避讳想法新颖但却无法用英语来表达的窘境。
一般的模式是在引言段复述题干内容,直截了当提出自己的idea,点明自己即将要在后文阐述的这个建议或解决方案好在哪里,为什么特别推崇这个方案。接下来就是摆事实讲道理,最后把文章引入一个自然的总结段中即可。
常用模板
1. 问题解决型(如1998 ,2002)
引言段 :复述题干中的背景
a. -------- has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young, and heated debates are right on their ways.
b. Recently, -------- has become the focus of the society. And in this way, people swarm to -------- and serious problems follow.
c. -------- has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but created some serious problems as well. d.Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of--------. I would like to suggest a way to solve the problem. We might as well (解决 的方案). It is necessary that we do so for the following reasons.
主体段 :For one thing, (方案的优势1). (详细阐述) For another, (方案的优势2). (详细阐述) 或者有3种以上优势和理 由的,参考使用 :
To begin with, then, furthermore, finally
To start with, next, in addition, finally
First and foremost, besides, last but not least
Most important of all, moreover, finally
总结段 :Above all, it is highly recommendable that we solve the problem in/through ... for its advantages of A, B and C (这里再把理 由压缩一下叙述一遍).
2. 建议型(如2005)
引言段 :复述题干中的背景 ,I suggest that we should (把idea ,suggestion都亮 出来)
主体段 :详细描述idea和suggestion ,阐明它们 的优势和作用 :
By doing so, we could ...
It is feasible and effective for the following reasons... In this way, not only can students ..., but also they are able to ...
总结段:小结一下背景,I hope that my ideas and suggestions will contribute a lot to ...
作文之写作摸板--现象解释说明/结果预测型
the reasons of ...
the consequences of ...
the effective measures
典型例题
Nowadays more and more students choose to further their studies abroad, for example, in the USA or UK. What could be the possible reasons behind this social phenomenon?
In the modern society, people depend on technology more and more, such as mobile phones and the Internet. What can be the possible consequences or impacts on people’s lives?
解题思路
考生要看清题目,是解释原因,还是预测可能的结果,还是两者都要覆盖到。我们一般会在引言段交代时代背景,然后开门见山地谈本文探讨该现象的产生原因或导致的结果 。 常用模板
引言段:Recently, ... has been brought into focus... No where in history has the issue been more visible. In this essay, I aim to explore this complicated phenomenon from diverse perspectives, identify the relevant contributing factors and bring up some effective measures. (最后半句根据题 目需要取舍 ,看题 目中有没有要求提出建议措施)
主体段.:As far as I am concerned, an array of integrated factors contributes to the... The first role that should be blamed is... Another equally important factor lies in... Last but not least, ...
总结段:As a matter of fact, ...gives rise to a host of problems, such as... Confronted with such a thorny issue, people come up with a variety of constructive
考此条 )
作文之写作摸板--个人观点表达型
My view on ...
My idea of ...
近十年来纯粹的个人观点表达型已不多见,一般都是给背景介绍和对立的观点让考生选择 ,但是我们依然要未雨绸缪,做到有备无患。重要 的是理清思路,抓住重点,这样才不至于在考试 中走得太远 。
典型真题
(1992)
My View on Reading Extensively
(1993)
My Idea of Becoming a Teacher in the Future
解题思路
很多同一看到个人观点表达型的文章就激动不已,文思如泉涌,还想进行分类讨论 ,比如,1992年的题目,有的考生写道,小时候要多读书,广泛地读(reading extensively) ,到了本科或研究生阶段就要术业有专攻(reading selectively) ;连具体的时间节点都安排好了。这对于考场中的“烤鸭”们来说是自找麻烦,一是时间不允许,二是专四的大作文都有要求 ,写三段,You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state clearly what countermeasures. Personally, the following is worth recommendation... (分析现象背后的原因的题目也往往会让考生给出建设性措施,可参
your view is. In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary. 显然没有太多空间来作分类讨论。其实这类题型和前面所述的观点选择型非常接近,无非就是yes or no。比如,要么,我觉得应该广泛地涉猎 、广博地阅读 ,优势有哪些 ,一二三罗列并扩展;要么,我的观点是阅读应少而精, 有的放矢,不支持所给观点,reading extensively的弊端在哪里,摆事实讲道理。总之,不要模棱两可 ,要有明确的观点。只要有理可讲、论述合理 ,都可以成为一篇好文章。
常用模板
引言段 :There is no consensus of (opinions/ disagreements) among people as to the view of --------. Some people suggest that --------, while some other people argue that --------. As far as
I am concerned, -------- (提出 自己的论点 ).
主体段 :提供论据 ,证 明 自己的观点 :First and foremost, --------. Furthermore, --------.
Last but not the least important, --------.
总结段 :To put all into a nutshell, it is natural to reach a conclusion that --------. 作文之写作摸板--分析利弊/差异型
advantages and disadvantages
merits and demerits
strengths and weaknesses
benefits and dangers
positive and negative
the importance/significance/benefits of ...
the main differences between ... and ...
典型真题
(1995)
Nowadays it has become fashionable for college students to take a part-time job in their spare time. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.
(1996)
Every college student would agree that life in college is not the same as it was in the middle school. Now, you have been asked by the Student’s Union to write a passage entitled:
The Main Difference Between My College Life and My Middle School Life
(1999)
We see advertisements on television everyday. Some people think that TV advertising brings us bene ts, but others don’t think so. What is your opinion? Major Advantage/Disadvantage of Advertising on Television
(2000)
College life should be varied and colorful and extracurricular activities are an important aspect of it. However, at present, there is much room for improvement in this regard. Write an article to the university radio entitled: The Importance of Extracurricular Activities
Travel has become part of our life. And more and more of us have come to know the signi cance of travel through our own experience:
Travel Broadens the Mind
(2003)
People in modern society live under a lot of pressure, from education, career or family. So it is important for them to keep a good mood under whatever circumstances.
The Importance of Keeping a Good Mood
(2008)
December 5th is International Volunteers’ Day. Since 1985, when the United Nations announced the special day, tens of millions of people around the world have volunteered to help those in need. China now has 4.5 million registered volunteers that have provided more than 4.5 billion hours of volunteer work. What can you gain from volunteering? Write a composition of about 200 words
on the following topic:
The Bene ts of Volunteering
解题思路
考生要看清题目的要求,有时是需要利弊两方面都谈,有时题干中已经规定好了是写优势、重要性还是弊端。阅卷人往往希望看到考生的文章思路开阔、条理清晰,比如2008
年的题目,题干要求论述“志愿活动的好处”,主体部分可以着重论述志愿活动对社会的好处,也可以论述志愿活动给志愿者本人带来的好处,还可以兼顾两方面。构思立意时要从多个角度论述自己的观点,并对所有素材加以整合、归纳。以讨论“对志愿者自己的好处”为例,考生可以讨论如下好处:
第一,提升交际、沟通能力(包括扩大交际面,与不同的人打交道,协调不同的关系,理解不同的立场等)。
第二,提高工作能力、学以致用(主要谈对自己知识、技能的提高有什么作用,包括学校知识的运用、实际能力的提高等,注意与前面的“交际能力”有所区分)。
第三,成就感,获得心理上的满足(获得尊敬与承认,实现自我价值)。
常用模板
1. 引言段:AAA has improved the quality of our lives and is playing an important role in our daily life. The benefits that AAA brings to us are far more than its disadvantages. However, we cannot ignore its problems.
主体段:On the positive side, AAA has enabled us to (AAA 的优势1). For instance, ...Besides, (优势2). Nowadays, ... In addition, (优势3), such as ... On the negative side, (AAA的弊端1). For example, ... Besides, (弊端2). Furthermore, (弊端3).
总结段 :All in all, we cannot live without AAA for the convenience it brings to us, but we
should also be aware of the negative effects it creates on the modern life.
2.引言段:BBB has been playing an increasingly important role in our daily life and its advantages are undeniable to us.
主体段 :Most importantly, (BBB 的好处1). (详细阐述) We should also focus our attention on (好处2). (详细阐述) Likewise, (好处3) is worth some words here. (详
细阐述)
总结段 :All in all, it is no denying that we cannot live without BBB. It ..., ..., and ... (再总结压缩一下BBB 的优势或重要性 )
3.引言段 :(复述题干背景) Comparing CCC with DDD, there do exist many differences.
主体段 :The maj or difference lies in ... (详细阐述). There is also a difference in the aspect of ...(详细阐述)
总结段 :To sum up, CCC and DDD are different considering ... and ...
4.引言段 :(复述题干背景) Looking into EEE and FFF, the maj or difference is that ...
主体段 :(因为只是 阐述主要 的差异 ,题干 中是单数 ,所 以一定要注意围绕这一点详细阐述 )
总结段 :Comparing EEE with FFF, there are many differences, among which the most prominent one lies in ...