2011年考研英语作文模板(15)

因此，应该采取有效措施缓解严重的交通堵塞问题。第一，通过提高税费限制私家车拥有率(保有量)。第二，应该鼓励和推广低碳的公交车、地铁等公共交通工具，以便我们拥有更顺畅的交通。

名师点评

① it is more of a parking lot than a crowded street: more of A than B的结构，通过字面可以理解成：更多的是A而不是B。

翻译的时候，往往翻译成：与其说是B，不如说是A。

反过来，当我们想用英语表达“与其……不如……”的时候，我们可以采用这个结构。

实际上，这个结构在历年真题阅读中曾多次出现。如2000年Text 3中的选项：Futurist poetry is more of a transient phenomenon than literature。

② With the number of private cars increasing: with 短语表伴随，翻译成“随着”。

③ exhausted gas emitted by cars: 其中emitted by cars是过去分词短语作后置定语。

相当于定语从句：gas which is emitted by cars(被汽车排放的尾气)。

写法：请参考《商业行贿》点评第①条。

④ taxes levied on the sales of private cars: 其中levied on the sales of private cars(针对私家车被征的税)，为过去分词做定语。写法：请参考《商业行贿》点评第①条。

九、科技与生活

思路点拨

图中描述的是武广高铁的开通，给城际交通带来了极大便利。表面上看，它反映

的是城市与城市之间距离被“缩短”的问题，但是更深层次来讲，是科技带来了这一切，

所以这幅图可以有两个切入点：城际交通、科技改变生活。本文作者选取了第二个角

度为主要论述视角。

第一段：图画描述；第二段：两个角度论述科学技术是第一生产力；第三段：提

出建议、展望未来。

思维拓展

科技的话题，实际上是映射热点问题：上海世博。

世博的主题“城市让生活更美好”，其中一个侧面就是城市与科技。

可以反映“科技”主题的图片有很多，如现代通讯、网络等。

例如下图，表面上看是反对迷信，深层含义实际上就是崇尚科学。

崇尚科学

高分范文

As is vividly depicted by the picture above, a traveler happily starts his journey by high-speed railway from Guangzhou to Wuhan. In the year of 2009, Wuhan-Guangzhou high-speed railway went into operation, reducing travelling time from 12 hours to 3 hours, bringing much convenience to the transportation between the two cities①. No wonder the caption in the picture says “with the Wu-Guang high-speed railway, cities far away is just like a place nearby”。

Science and technology are the primary productive forces② and have been playing a key role in the national economy development. On the one hand, progress in science and technology has promoted economic and social progress greatly. Take the high-speed railway as an example. Firstly, the railway becomes a new engine③ of booming of regional economic.

Secondly, the railway helps to attract a lot of tourists, so that tourism in these cities flourishes. Last but not the least, the load

of the existing transportation network can be released to a great extent. On the other hand, with the development of science