高三英语试卷讲评课的有效性研究 结题报告(11)

阅读理解着重按题型指导解题技巧；书面表达注重语言润色、提升的技巧等。如：

在书面表达“Ways to get relaxed”的讲评过程中，教师不仅要求学生纠正示范习作中的错误，将作文分层（如下） ① One way is to take exercise, walking, running, playing basketball or football, etc.

② We can also watch TV, where we are able to enjoy varieties of colorful programs both in Chinese and English as well .

③ Moreover, we can surf the internet to get some relaxation and entertainment. 并要求学生来逐句/层修改，然后欣赏以下佳句

① One way is to take exercise, walking, running, playing basketball or football, etc.

As is often the case, students have a preference for physical exercise to relax themselves. (张炜哲、陈亮波) …for physical exercise can increase the capability to lead a healthy life. （周梦瑜）

② We can also watch TV, where we are able to enjoy varieties of colorful programs both in Chinese and English as well .

Some students tend to release pressure by watching TV,……(陈佳惠)

TV can always help blow away our stress and pressure with its vivid images and rich knowledge.(徐路蓝) ③ Moreover, we can surf the internet to get some relaxation and entertainment.

Surfing the Internet gives students plenty of mental joy, provided it’s not over-done. (乐琪) Surfing the Internet is also listed among the top three ways to…(杨晟斌) 最后在实践的基础上总结书面表达润色提升的关键:

① Use advanced or original vocabulary. ② Use various sentence patterns.

定语从句、 同位语从句 非谓语动词虚拟语气

倒装句、So… that句型、not only…but also句型、强调句型 谚语

③ Add linking words.